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Flash Fiction Friday, October 21st

October 21, 2011

She curled into the position he asked for with a pained delight. She could hear him come over to her. She could feel his breath on the top of her head. He leaned down and arranged her hair the way he liked it. The red mass collecting around her breasts and neck. Then he took her hand and positioned it in her hair, she then pushed her hair up, giving it a disheveled look she knew he liked.

He positioned the headphones on her knee and stepped back.


FLASH! The camera continued to click into the afternoon.

Flash Fiction Friday 10-21-11
38-98 words
*pained delight*

Sorry everyone! I’ve been MIA over the past week or so… Dont worry I’m back, and in full force ;)

(click here for this weeks challenge)




3 Comments leave one →
  1. October 24, 2011 5:47 pm

    Very nice take. Or should I say Photo? :) A nice twist.

  2. October 27, 2011 1:00 pm


    Nice work

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