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Flash Fiction Friday: August 05

August 6, 2011


She walked to the dressing room, the grey eyed man she had been ogling from across the shop, close on her heels. There was no attendant, she continued to walk down to the end of the hall. Just about to close and lock the small white door she was forced back. She was quickly turned around and a rough mouth smothered her lips. Long demanding kisses over took her. She looked up and into those swirling grey eyes and smiled.

He pulled her farther into him. She could see his fingers splayed across her narrow waist, wanted them to continue on their tingling path down, into her jeans. She could feel herself becoming wet. His hand moved and his slender fingers dipped lower. While he played with her thin curls, she reached behind her and undid his button and zipper..

She guided his cock deep between her pussy lips and their hips began to collide as she bucked against him. As her climax started his large hands engulfed her tits and tortured her nipples. With a strangled cry she felt her orgasm rip her apart.

Flash Fiction Friday: 08-05-2011
80-160 words (First timer here, its a little long)
*strangled cry*

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15 Comments leave one →
  1. August 6, 2011 4:13 am

    Very nice job, Goldi! Loved the sexual confidence of both the girl and the guy.

  2. August 6, 2011 11:37 am

    A tantalizing bit of sex! Delicious.

  3. August 6, 2011 4:09 pm

    Nice and erotic with a taste of taboo. Good stuff!

  4. August 6, 2011 10:12 pm

    I like the grey eyes particularly. And if you cut 40 words from this, it doesn’t show. Or maybe it does show; what I’m trying to say is that you must have cut well because the piece is a good one.

    • August 7, 2011 9:00 pm

      Thanks Lexi…
      It was hard to cut, but I managed. Actually once I started to cut down I liked how it sounded a but more raw, and animalistic in a way. But maybe thats just me lol

      Thanks for the comment!!


  5. August 8, 2011 5:18 pm

    As a first timer here I’m very very impressed. Urgent, direct, plausible, it was a great read. Thanks for joining in!

  6. August 11, 2011 5:45 am

    Damn! That’s sexy.

    Good writing.

    My fave: “his large hands engulfed her tits and tortured her nipples.”


    • August 11, 2011 8:43 pm

      Thanks Hedone! Im so glad you enjoyed!!!
      I look forward to tomorrow’s FFF and your thoughts ;)

  7. LexiHallows permalink
    August 15, 2011 7:36 pm

    Very raw, very sexy.
    A fantasy I would love to fulfill for sure.

    • August 15, 2011 7:40 pm

      Thanks for the comment Lexi!

      I am glad you enjoyed! My entry for FFF August 12, will be up tomorrow, along with everything else I missed last week.



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